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The Subs of Yeskodovo

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Hey! So, I finally finished! Def my first full fledged background attempt! Altho of course I’m suffering from the “this doesn’t look quite like I wanted it to” I’m still pretty happy with how it came out. :P: It was great for training, and making the rp with Gigantera  something more concrete. Now it has an illustrated location! hahahahahaha

I wanted it to look like a serious cyberpunkish city at first but uuughhh… coloring with all grays is so sad hahahaha no, kidding, is just that, I didn’t want it to look too dead, since this rp is so full of energy :eager:

Well, anyways. No babblering anymore. 
The Allum’s is a bar/dinner thing run and owned by Allum Astern, a friendly dude that knows more than he should. 
Here, shown deliverying Tate (face covered by helmet) his next dinner. Agnes and Bastien are behind, talking and being cuties, then we have Sage  and his general tiredness and also Laila and Mia, two great friends. 
The joke here is that Laila/Tate and Mia/Sage are pairs but in this drawing they don’t really know each other yet. 

I hope you guys liked it! The links above all lead to drawings from said character on Tumblr!

Original tumblr post: mahammarsart.tumblr.com/post/1…


Sage  Sage L. Copper by MahAmmar
Tate  Character Sheet 1 - Tiny Animations by MahAmmar (click for better view, it's a kinda animated character sheet)
Bastien and Agnes  Cuties on an invisible bench.jpg by MahAmmar



:dummy: COMMENTS WOULD BE SUPPER NICE ON THIS ONE :dummy:

The characters and locations are: :iconmahammar: and :icongigantera:
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Hello there! ^-^

Good points:

- You made a good attempt on try to make this a lively and energetic cyberpunkish city. If you hadn't added all those bright colors, then it would have looked sad.

- I like how the people also contribute to this lively scene. The fact that almost everyone seems happy helps with the energy of this scene!

- The perspective seems pretty good and the buildings are proportionate to the bird's eye view.

Improvements/Suggestions/Questions:

- Personally, I think the artwork doesn't look that neat with the loose lines and the scribbles for the shading. I suggesting actually drawing a full shape and making neater. But it's fine if you prefer drawing messier.

- I wonder if you could have added more cyberpunkish elements into this scene. I don't really understand cyberpunk myself so I can't help you on this. (Maybe add more tech?)

Hope this helps!